The Erl-King
Why do you think Carter chose this title
for this tale? How appropriate do you think it is and why?
Definition: The Erlking
(German: Erlkönig, "Alder King") is depicted in a number of
German poems and ballads as a malevolent creature that haunts forests and
carries off travelers to their deaths.
The title ‘The Erl-King’ was used in a
European folklore persona, as the ‘erlking’. An ‘erlking’ can typically be
described in this form as a mischievous sprite or an elf that lures young
people with the intent of killing them. Immediately from the beginning of the
story we are made aware that the narrator is conscious of the fact that the Erl
King offers danger to herself – ‘The Erl-King will do you grievous harm.’
Linkin goes as far as to describe the narrator as ‘a highly sophisticated
consciousness.’ It is clear from this quote that the narrator is aware of her
subjugation to the ‘green man’ as she responds actively to the birdcall from
the Erl King informing the reader that she is aware of the consequences of her
actions. Throughout the other
Bloody Chamber tales, specifically the Bloody Chamber, the female narrator can
be described as naïve and immature. However, this is not the case of the woman,
as she allows him to call her a ‘skinned rabbit’ as he bites her neck.
The narrator of the story becomes aware
that the birds entrapped by the Erl King and unable to sing as they ‘cannot
find their way out of the woods’. He entraps the women who wonder the forest at
their own free will to become suppressed by his status of being a man, and
therefore dominant, as they submissively (and perhaps unwittingly) become his
servant. This conversely, does not apply to the narrator. The initial
description of the woods foreshadows her later entrapment by the Erl King
–‘these vertical bars of a brass-coloured distillation of light coming down
from sulphur-yellow interstices in a sky hunkered with grey clouds…’ The
‘vertical bars’ can be linked to the gothic theme of entrapment, as the
narrator becomes what can typically be described as passive, demure woman
trapped and suppressed by the male’s dominant nature.
The adjective ‘sulphur’ is used to describe
the colour of the bars envisaged by the narrator. In Blake’s The French Revolution, ‘sulphur’ holds
connections with death, which can be identifiable in Carter’s Erl King as it is
reflected in the foreshadowing of death of the Erl King as the tale concludes.
The Erl King’s role as the dominant character in the tale is reversed in the
conclusion of the story as the narrator decides her own fate as the dominant
character when the death of the Erl King and the fiddle which is made of the
Erl King’s hair calls her ‘mother’ is demonstrative of her as a woman with
which the power newly resides.
Conclusively, the title can be called
appropriate to the tale as the narrator describes the Erl King as a ‘tender-butcher’.
It is the irony within this statement that allows the Erl King to fit with the
description of someone who ‘lures young people with the intent of killing them’.
Whilst the narrator allows the Erl King to dominate her arouses her, he is also
corrupting her status as a free-willed female. Despite the Erl King being her
lover, he is also a destroyer of the narrator at the same time. The entrapment
that the Erl King offers in the cages he has trapped birds also fits with the
description that he ‘lures young people with the intent of killing’ providing
an additional reason that the Erl King is a suitable title.
This is a huge step forward Emily. Your writing is becoming more confident and you are increasingly using a gothic vocabulary. What we'll need to develop next is the ability to hit all AO's in every paragraph. At A2 the AO's are equally weighted so it is essentially that you hit them all with every point.
ReplyDeleteI think you could expand your point on the speakers maturity as I'm not sure you've written a convincing explanation yet. You also need to 'place' your points, for example the 'sulpher' comment just sort of appears at random, where is it in the tale, what is happening?
Well done, you are making good progress.